Sunday, February 21, 2016

The Writing Process


I tend to write in fragments -- not in sentence fragments, but rather fragmented paragraphs. Instead of
starting at the beginning with an introduction and then taking that through to the body paragraphs and a conclusion, I jump around the page, starting one paragraphs when an idea hits me and taking it as far is it goes, before jumping over to another thought. Sometimes I'll make notes for what a paragraph is going to be about, and sometimes I'll just leave a blank space to indicate that some sort of transition is needed still between one idea and another.

Oftentimes, I'll save the introduction for the very end -- I find it's easier sometimes to write an introduction to what I'm going to say after I've already said it. This happens more often when I'm not entirely sure where my writing is going to go, like when I'm writing for my blogs. In those cases, I'll often start with a topic or subject but not really be sure what I'm going to end up saying about it, so the introduction ends up writing itself once I've finished the body. When writing professionally or for school, I'm more prone to start with the introduction, which helps me focus my thoughts and gets me started.

I think that younger, novice writers tend to write fairly linearly. In general, that's how English teachers teach writing -- at least, that's how my teachers taught me when I was coming up through grade school and secondary school. I first learned the classic five-paragraph format; the introduction, three body paragraphs, and a conclusion, in that order. Instead of bouncing around a piece and following whatever stray thoughts came into my head that might be useful, I focused on a very regimented order of what to write about. I think this can cause one's writing to suffer, because we don't necessarily come up with ideas in the order we want to -- if we don't follow a thought, we may never get it back again.

Of course, this style of writing contrasts with the model presented in the article by Flowers & Hayes, which talks about a more fluid style of writing in which the processes of generating ideas, "translating" and revising all happen in waves, rather than as separate actions. Many students dislike pre-writing activities -- and while I believe that a traditional outline can help in certain situations, I understand the frustration with breaking things down in that way. A more natural way to write is what's presented by Flowers and Hayes.

Sunday, February 7, 2016

Writing Coach Profile



Hi! My name is Travis and I'm a graduate student at UW-Milwaukee. I am currently seeking certification as an English teacher while working toward a Master's degree in English Education. I graduated from UW-Whitewater in 2010 with a Bachelor's degree in English with a creative writing emphasis and a minor in journalism.

I'm a big sports fan, and I currently work as a Brewers writer for SB Nation and Baseball Prospectus. I also write for a sports and humor site called Crooked Scoreboard. In addition to being a Brewers and baseball fan, I love the Packers, Badgers, Bucks and Pittsburgh Penguins. I play kickball and volleyball with my friends as well.

Aside from my writing, I also work full time as a financial aid adviser at another university. Between working full time, writing part time at three different sites, and attending grad school part time, the answer to, "What do you do with your free time?" is, "What's free time?" If it theoretically existed, I would probably be reading (my favorite book is "Catch 22" by Joseph Heller), playing board games (my favorite game is Carcassonne) or video games (you would beat me at Call of Duty), watching TV shows (my favorite show right now is Masterchef Junior) and listening to music (my favorite acts are Run the Jewels, Taylor Swift and Brand New).

I look forward to working with you this semester!!

Monday, February 1, 2016

My history with blogging

I have a fairly extensive history working with social media and creating digital content. I've been on Twitter since 2011, I didn't start using it in earnest until 2014.
using Facebook socially since I was an undergraduate freshman in 2005, and though I've owned an account on

As far as blogging is concerned, I'm a very active blogger. I had been writing my own blog since around 2013 or so, but haven't kept it up much lately, with a notable exception last month. Last summer, I was brought in as an intern to write for a new local branch of Baseball Prospectus, to which I contribute a weekly column.This opportunity launched me into being hired as a staff writer at Brew Crew Ball, the Brewers blog that is part of the SB Nation network of sports blogs. You can find my author page here.

Through my blogging and, by extension, through my use of Twitter to engage with readers, fans and other writers, I have been able to become a part of a nationwide community of baseball fans that includes some of the most influential voices in baseball media. I have been interviewed for pieces being written at other sites like Beyond the Box Score and Purple Row, and I have been invited to join the staff at sports and humor blog, Crooked Scoreboard. I recently recorded the first episode of a podcast with two other writers, one a Beyond the Box Score columnist living in New Jersey and the other a Baseball Prospectus writer in Boston by way of Chicago. Through my use of digital content and social media, I have opened up myself to a world of opportunities to advance my hobby/second career.

Given the experience I have had, I would say one of the greatest potential benefits to digital content creation is the opportunity to expand your network and to create opportunities for yourself in your social life and in your career. In our digital age, the ability to have a record of the things you've created will almost serve as a resume for people. In the Jenkins article we read today, he spoke of promoting a "participatory culture" -- one with low barriers to creating and sharing content, a high amount of support and social interactivity, and one in which all feel free to share and collaborate, even if they do not actively participate.

Of course, one of the pitfalls to having that permanent record of your online creations is that when you create something that is inappropriate or offensive, it doesn't go away, no matter how hard you try. That's why another part of the participatory culture in Jenkins article, the presence of a mentor to guide younger users, is important. It is vitally important for students to understand that the things they create and share with the public become can permanent very, very quickly. An example of this is this article about cyberbullying, posted by my friend Nic at Sports Illustrated's The Cauldron. Here, thre are several examples of very nasty tweets directed at women sportswriters that have since been deleted, but are not immortalized in a very public way through screenshots. Should any potential future employer stumble upon these, it would be very difficult for these young people to find and keep a position.